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Shambles

Photography Photography \ Architecture | 02/18/08 @958 | Byonder | Comments critiques (15) | Views views (622)


Shambles
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The inside of the Metropolitan Inn in Asbury Park, NJ. It was condemned some time ago and is scheduled to be torn-down in the near future.

The photo is level, the building isn't.
 
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Avatar ThruMyEyez

 02/18/08 @978

Excellent use of lighting, composition, and textures. You are a master at abandoned buildings! :)
 
Avatar moserArtist

 02/18/08 @981

@Gary: Lights perfect? :p Dah...

Looks more like you, for once, was not mastering/in control of the lights...

The white wall on the far distance, through the open door, as well as the left yellow wall both look a bit overexposed (ie lacking details).

Think also that you would come off with a better composition if the door opening was not so centrally placed (more off center maybe).

One day you might get hurt in one of those wrecked buildings... ;)
You are really brave! :p
 
Avatar ARZILLIER66

 02/19/08 @004

Cool capture!
cool light and textures
 
Avatar Vasco

 02/19/08 @033

I think you have some overexposed areas! apart from that it's CHAOS, and I like it!!!!
 
Avatar oldskool87

 02/19/08 @329

nice capture :)
 
Avatar Ironwolf

 02/19/08 @338

Nice picture.
 
Avatar MsMichelleLynn

 02/19/08 @433

I'm sure that if you exposed this based on the outside light that you'd have aroom that was much too dark. I don't see another option to properly expose the room other than perhaps trying HDR. To me, the over-exposed areas do not cause problems. They seem very natural for the scene. I enjoy the different angles created by the walls and of course the details of the mess on the floor. Colors are nice as well.

Good work Brandon.

Michelle
 
Avatar Daykan

 02/19/08 @597

Yeah, great capture!! Perspective and deep sensation it´s awesome!! Very nice!!
 
Avatar Juro

 02/19/08 @655

Good depth, interesting photo to look into, good angle on the window adds interest. Nice colours and control of light/exposure.

Watch yourself going into these places, one clonk (from something falling) on the head and it could be lights out.

See you around Brandon.
 
Avatar Juro

 02/19/08 @656

Sorry, double post.




Ah, what the hell...



 
Avatar LiddleLarsen

 02/19/08 @677

Just cool.... Great work.... Agree with Michelle about the exposure ;)
 
Avatar jfrancis

 02/20/08 @309

Nice! Shoot some nudes thare!
 
Avatar Byonder

 02/20/08 @366

Ooh, a Juro Award -- Gold no less, nice!

@  jfrancis: I'd shoot models in these locations, but I think I might have a bit of trouble getting them to agree to venture into condemned buildings :p The only way into this particular building was over a seven foot barbed-wire fence.

Thanks everyone for the comments :)
 
Avatar ClaraSoto

 02/20/08 @775

Great capture!!!!! I can feel the dust and the smell!!!
 
Avatar Almost-Human

 02/21/08 @479

Great image, at JURO LMAO......... glad the awards have returned :)

The exposure in the window is over, you know that already. its great from a compositional point of view, personally I think you are nuts going into these building but I am glad you do when I see your work..

HDR is the way forward for this, and thats coming form a man who never or cant use it :)

Well done.
9+
 
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